Editorial Services
As a traditionally published author who understands the journey from first draft to bookshelf, I bring unique insight to the editorial process.
I'm currently offering fixed, competitive rates as I build my editorial portfolio, giving you access to professional-quality services at introductory prices. I've walked in your shoes and experienced the vulnerability of sharing your work. I'm here to help! :)
Genres I Love:
Adult Fiction
- Romance - Contemporary, paranormal, and romantic suspense
- Thrillers - Psychological, crime and action thrillers
- Horror - Supernatural and psychological
- Mystery - Cozy mysteries, police procedurals, and private investigator
- Speculative Fiction - Science fiction, cozy fantasy and dystopian
Young Adult Fiction
- Fantasy - Urban fantasy, cozy fantasy, and magical realism
- Romance - Contemporary and paranormal
- Mystery - Teen sleuths, school mysteries, and family secrets
- Horror - Supernatural, psychological, and coming-of-age
- Thrillers - YA suspense and action
- Speculative Fiction - YA dystopian, sci-fi, and time travel stories
Editorial Services
Developmental Editing: How can this story be structurally improved?
- Base Service (up to 80,000 words): £200
- Additional words: £2.50 per 1,000 words over 80k
- Chapter-by-chapter feedback with detailed analysis
- Inline comments throughout your manuscript
- Focus on plot structure, character development, pacing, and narrative flow
- Assessment of story arc, tension, and reader engagement
Add-On Services:
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Chapter Outlines & Writing Guidance: £50
- Detailed chapter-by-chapter roadmap
- Scene breakdowns and plot point mapping
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Character Arc Development: £80
- Comprehensive character journey analysis
- Detailed character sheets with motivations, growth arcs, and consistency tracking
- Relationship dynamics mapping
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Re-read After Revisions: £100
- Second comprehensive review after you've implemented initial feedback
Beta Reading: How did this make me feel as a reader?
Perfect for manuscripts that have already undergone developmental editing or are near-final drafts
- Complete Service (up to 80,000 words): £65
- Additional words: £1.00 per 1,000 words over 80k
- Reader experience report focusing on engagement and emotional response
- Overall impression of plot, characters, and pacing from a reader's viewpoint
- Identification of confusing scenes or plot holes that disrupt reading flow
- Feedback on ending satisfaction and emotional payoff
- Brief written report (2-3 pages) with key observations
Manuscript Critique
- Complete Service (up to 80,000 words): £100
- Additional words: £1.50 per 1,000 words over 80k
- Comprehensive editorial letter addressing:
- Overall story strengths and areas for improvement
- Plot structure and pacing analysis
- Character development assessment
- Market positioning and genre expectations
- Comparable titles analysis
Plot Rescue Package
£150
Ideal for writers who feel "stuck" or have received feedback about structural issues
Intensive structural intervention for problematic manuscripts, including:
- In-depth analysis of structural weaknesses and plot holes
- Complete plot restructuring recommendations with detailed explanations
- Scene reordering suggestions with rationale
- Pacing solutions for slow or rushed sections
- Subplot integration and trimming advice
- Chapter break optimization
- Before/after outline comparison
Word Count Pricing
Base services include manuscripts up to 80,000 words. For longer manuscripts, the following rates apply:
Additional Word Count Charges
- Developmental Editing: £2.50 per 1,000 words over 80k
- Manuscript Critique: £1.50 per 1,000 words over 80k
Pricing Examples
- 90,000 words: Base price (£200) + £25 (10k extra words)
- 100,000 words: Base price (£200) + £50 (20k extra words)
- 120,000 words: Base price (£200) + £100 (40k extra words)
Word count is based on your document's word count feature. Partial thousands are rounded up (e.g., 85,500 words = 6,000 extra words charged).
Process & Timeline
Expected Turnaround Times:
- Manuscript Critique: 2-3 weeks
- Developmental Edit: 3-4 weeks
- Specialized Packages: 2-3 weeks
- Rush Service Available: +50% fee for priority turnaround
Are You Ready For It?
Getting started:
- Fill out this form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfO6jDfV4IyJSsB9wICFGBlJaYcxJ3T9KHOKQ4Pl_H04mAHsw/viewform?usp=sharing&ouid=100678325711382358466
or...
- Email: editorial@sarapucci.com
- Response Time: Within 24 hours
Investment & Payment:
- Deposit Required: 50% to secure your slot
- Payment Methods: PayPal or Bank Transfer
Every great story deserves professional editorial support. Let's work together to make your book the best it can be. :)